Pitch Reflection

Pitch Reflection

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give more detail on?

My presentation focused mostly on the creativity of my pitch this meant me explaining why my idea was different, there was a key concept In my music video which was unique, this was the genre subverting bit, in my hip hop music video I made it different as the artist was dressed in a smart way whereas normal hip hop music video they mostly wear casual clothes, this made my idea different. In my pitch I would wanted to explain more about the camera techniques I will be using as that would have gave the audience a better understanding, if I did this again I will try add more details to the camera techniques.

What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?

The audience like the fact that my music video was different compared to other music videos, they wasn’t expecting, this told me I choose a good concept. Another strength I found was that my music video had a lot of music video conventions like lip syncing and genre subverting etc. this made my music video more interesting according to the audience. This pleased me as I wanted to use a lot of music conventions as I know that it will make my music video more entertain than others, this is why I choose to do so. Strength was that they liked the fact that I was characters who matched the artist identity I was aiming for.

What did your audience identify as areas for improvement?

Many people told me that my idea was good but I could improve it by adding more ideas to it for example including a female actor in my music video would allow me to aim the music video at both genders. This improvement has helped me make my music video more universal, by this I mean I can appeal it to more people rather than the niche audience, this will allow my music video to be more popular as it would be universal. Another improvement suggested by the audience was that I add more cast to my music video as it add more energy to the music video.

What changes will you make to your music video concept based on your feedback received?

Overall the feedback has been okay, but I will be making amendments very soon. My plan is to improve my music video by defiantly adding female cast, as the feedback allowed me to understand that by changing small things I could make it better and also aim at more people, this is my main aim as I want a universal audience. Another amendment I will be making is to make sure that my cast is chosen appropriately, by this I mean that they match the role.